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this was actually done on the front of a folder. i just turned up the brightness and de-saturated the yellow.

i also figured out why my scanner hated me these past four years i've had it. xD she the sharpness level was set extremely high. that screws up my lines.

anyways, THIS is my two protagonist characters of all my set: Ayase and Kei.

supposed to be a representation of me and my sweetheart. <3

wuvs you, Kissa dear. :3

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:iconvalendra:
You know, this is a very detailed sketch and I really liked their designs. Pose is cute, giving nice vibes on romance field. But there are somethings I must point out!

Study human anatomy, and draw from reference images once in a while. While poses look natural, there are some disturbing minor positions over both their bodies. And they're floating I guess? Nevertheless, hairs look spiky, which is kind of an unnatural feature^^; Still, a nice background, a simple sky even, would lighten up the mood and make this piece more appealing to eye. Also, draw from references as I said, try drawing a portrait with pencil, or full body poses. You'll see benefits of it for sure =)
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:iconsilvervixen145:
Great job. ^^

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"It seems we've crossed paths again. It's a shame things have to be this way...but my orders are to eliminate you. We both know I'm no match for you...but I've no choice but to fight..."

"Go buy some ketchup and tell them it's blood."
:iconouranfangirl:
wow!

its kool

i like the clothes
teehee
:iconsilver-kissa:
i see you're definitely quite improving c:
there's still a little work that needs to be done with anatomy and especially the faces, but you're on the right track ^ _ ^
:iconplurias-concentio:
yaaaay Kissa thinks i'm improving!!! ^ w ^ -tackles- :3

i'll do my best to get better. c:

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"Love suffers long."
-1 Corinthians 13:4

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Kei - Crimson Legends - *Storm-Riders
Gale - Requiem of Souls - =Wielders-of-Ruin
Naomi "Angel" Levamin - ~Veritas-Fight-Club
:iconlilbang:
It a very cute romantic pose. (something I would never draw xD Hahahahhahahahaa~)

But yea, there's some proportion off and shieeeettt~ was this the reason why you want to go to ag to practice with me?

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(((d-_-b)))
-Feel The Beat-
:iconplurias-concentio:
YES IT IS. XD

i'm trying to impress my sweetheart and i'm not progressing fast enough to my tastes to do that. xD

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==
"Love suffers long."
-1 Corinthians 13:4

--

Kei - Crimson Legends - *Storm-Riders
Gale - Requiem of Souls - =Wielders-of-Ruin
Naomi "Angel" Levamin - ~Veritas-Fight-Club
:iconlilbang:
>_>;;;

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(((d-_-b)))
-Feel The Beat-
:iconplurias-concentio:
don't judge me. xD

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==
"Love suffers long."
-1 Corinthians 13:4

--

Kei - Crimson Legends - *Storm-Riders
Gale - Requiem of Souls - =Wielders-of-Ruin
Naomi "Angel" Levamin - ~Veritas-Fight-Club

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May 10, 2009, 11:56:44 PM

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